I cannot number the times you've cut me off,
choked me out, rubbed me raw, drained me.
Stench, stinking up my view like a thousand
flipped turtles on a stretch of prehistoric sand.
I'd bury you to dig you back up like a dog, later
Consuming you from your ass until your teeth.
My spent seed gumming up a future in you
Worshipped, your insight smells of old blood.
The way it sticks around like an uninvited cousin
Waiting for another monthly opportunity to breed.
Casting men up mountains to moan
alone with one another under hood.
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Written April 28th, 2004
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Should I puke or applaud? This is a very strange, yet poetically pleasing piece. -Raviyn
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Cunt is purely a hot word
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Hmm...yeah, women are pyscho and they can tear you apart into little pieces that are impossible to glue back together. I am one, but without doubt, we are psychotic freaks.
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No, it's a metaphor for vertical flounder marinated in moose knuckle syrup and camel toe clippings.
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Cunt isn't that the worthless piece of skin around the clit refered to as a women?
Edited on Apr 29, 3:02 p.m. because ''. -
I'm sorry.
Can I speak for all of the cunts and apologize? Or maybe it's one in particular that you ought to hear that from...
Stunning analogy/metaphor/symbolism/whatever else you want to call it. -
hmm...
the vehemence could rip the bark of a tree.
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you have to stop writing love poems .. you are killing me..almost feel the need to bite snakes ..
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I like it! Women suck...yes I am one BUT..we're evil
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You miserable, anguish-ridden twat. Oh, good poem by the way.
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I would have gone with the ballerina giving a gratuitous crotch shot for the border of this one, but that is just me. Cunt it is then.
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Remind me not to piss you off? Hmmm..and the way it sticks around for another month to breed...interesting metaphor, I like that ..a bit (I want to say grosser, but I think that's wrong) than one I would even think to think of ..and I'm rambling ...but seems like someone has been dense ..and needs to rethink themselves..(and I don't mean you)
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