A beautiful autumn creature makes me suddenly stop and stare
She has a red and blue flower tied neatly into her hair
Her small, glittery blue wings sparkle slightly in the sunlight
And her mysterious black and gold eyes shine ever so bright
She sits as still as a statue, her chin resting on her hand
The whole picture in front of me is actually quite grand
And the thing that made me nervous were her shiny blood red lips
She wore a turquoise tu-tu, and a white singlet down to her hips
And just before I awoke, she changed from sweet to scary
In all my life, I'd have never thought I would dream about a fairy!
Author notes
It's not my best work...
But it is my first picture prompt 
Here's the link:
http://redsigns.deviantart.com/art/The-Golden-Hour-149670939
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It's probably just me, but I'm not keen on the end-line rhyme. I feel like free verse might suit better for your free & beautiful choice of topic?
Your poem's descriptions do paint the scene well - definitely comes to life quite vividly, but I feel like your poem tends to only describe rather than show as well. Maybe some more unique word choice could help give a more poetic experience? Just my 2 cents! Thanks for entering.
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You are right...it's not your best work...
Good Luck (or should that be bad?) in the contest!
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This is good LOL, I like the rhyme and flow this beautifui scenery of nature is just so excellent. Thank you for sharing such beauty
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Very nice, Crystal. I like your rhyme. I liked the words you used. I liked your imagery. Fit perfectly to the picture.
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I love the imagery you have created.
best work or not, this is really good.
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