WE'RE ALL ON THIS TOGETHER.
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Sorry. I guess the title shouldn't be longer than the slogan.
Written April 28th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Let Nature Be Your Guide by wohadreambig.
300 points, ended April 29, 2004, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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HA! I think you've made a great Earth Day slogan
And how true it is, we've ALL got to share this spinning circle in which we live. We let it go to crap, and we all suffer. Good slogan Mark
~Aimee
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heh short but hey, iguess thats the point to be a slogan rather then a poem, gets attention faster, no need to keep up. i myself am not to heavily into saving nature, but if the bible sais not to destroy the earth i suppose you have the right idea, anyway this was refreshing. kepp writting.
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I like it. Please make the world stop spinning. I'm getting dizzy.
~Amanda~
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Stop the world! I want to get off!
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Wow, so shrot but yet full of truth...
You wrote one line that could also be said in 50 lines... Great job..
Good luck in the contest..
Tammy
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It has an earthy flavor to it. You certainly make clear the gravity of the situation!!
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PS I LIKE THE WAY ITS IN CAPITAL LETTERS IT MAKES IT SOUND SO IMPORTANT AND FORCEFUL LIKE A REMINDER OF SOMETHING WE SHOULD ALL KNOW AND REALISE ANYWAY
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this is lovely and so true it means so much more than is said like why are we all fighting and having wars and being stupid most of the time...it could be a whole lot more beautiful if we acted in a more beautiful loving way....
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This is awesome Keep up the inspiration and good luck in my contest. Thanks for entering
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I like it!! What a smart boy to think it up all by yourself!
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Great line Mark!
Good luck!
Mari
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