It graveyards entire cities
Hostages mountains
Veils fields of wheat
Waterfalls fountains
It clouds dark allys
Ghosts normal people
Redwoods small pinetrees
And Notre Dames small steeples
Though it changes everthing it leaves no lasting effects
Except maybe, just maybe, in the minds of those who witness it
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Written April 27th, 2004
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Excellent!
That is very, very, very good imagery. I love the contrast and verbiage you used. Hostages Mountains is my favorite. Who would ever think that something could ever overpower something such as a mountain? I live in a foggy area, and I will remember your poem often, for sure... -
oh i love this poem it rock i love the fact that yuo took something ppl normaly dont write about adn yuo wrote about it rock on
kami
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