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I want my little children

I want my little Children

He came to them,
To hold and love,
To caress their rosy cheeks,
And touch their hurts away.

People came to them,
They pushed and shoved,
The little children away,
“Do not go near.”

He came to them
“Suffer the little children to come on to me
Do not take them away
For they are the one’s.”

They came to him
“Lord Jesus bless us all,
For we worship you,
Embrace and keep your little children save.”

He came to them,
“Come my little children,
Come and follow me,
For I love you very much.”

“I want my little children”


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Written April 27th, 2004

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  • swankylady
    November 15, 2004
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    cute. i am liking it. it makes me happy.

  • FaithOfTheHeart
    June 24, 2004
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    great!

    Hey cuz! I already told you that i like this piece, but to put it in writing i guess...Every day i realize more and more how important children are in our lives. How important it is to teach them about God and all the right things, but to also tell them about the bad. I hope we never push them away. Keep looking up and God bless you!

    ~Faith~


  • -Ask me- I dare you
    June 14, 2004
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    Good write. Its amazing how Jesus wanted the children near him to teach em, but people shoved the kids away. Great job! God bless.
    ~tonya~


  • My Darkness
    May 2, 2004
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    I like this but i guess i'm just confused with it, it's not that it's hard to comprehend what you are saying i just don't get the total plot i suppose...thanks for sharing

    take care

    -Stac-