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In Simple Sighs

In simple sighs and blessed smiles,
You see me.
In longing eyes and coy disguise
You want me.
In falling tears and anguished fears,
You comfort me.
In softest kiss and heartfelt bliss
You loved me,
And I loved back.

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Written April 26th, 2004

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  • FrozenDaffodil
    May 3, 2004
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    I love your style! it never gets boring, it always has meaning, its always gorgeously written with real feelings behind the words... Always sweet. Keep up the sweetness!
    ~Dil


  • bethanystar88
    April 26, 2004
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    This is AMAZING. I love the simplicity of the words and they formed into a beautifully written piece. Perfect write.

    ~Beth