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Possibility Crisis

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Aliens
may be watching us
from an invisible dimension
but that doesn't justify
my telling you
that your
beliefs



don't matter.




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Written April 26th, 2004

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  • olddrivelandrubbish
    November 12, 2005
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    short but good

    a little short.. like a point prover...

    ill tell you my daily belief thought
    True morality implies a tolerance for other attitudes and modes of life, not necessarily an endorsement of them. The major immorality is in insisting (by coercion blackmail, or law) that others live and think as you do.

    so do whatever.. but since your puttin so much effort in... dare to tell me whats wrong. maybe ill then find the right.. or maybe ill tell u to fukoff and youll say the same to me and we can play fukkoff tennis.. i like that. not enough here to say more on moreon.... respect anyway


  • Moonshinesuicide
    October 25, 2005
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    aww those aliens are so cute *steals one*


  • Heavens Tragedy
    June 13, 2005
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    This explains so much Greg.. I mean, I knew you loved the littly guys but really lol .. Great job.
    Frances Lynn

  • marrow
    March 30, 2005
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    Wow.. so short but so full of meaning. Your message was devine. I greatly look forward to continuing to read your work seeing as we are both avid fans of Tori, Ani, etc. I am adding you to my favorite's list so I can keep on stopping by.

    Justin


  • Kalima
    January 20, 2005
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    Another amaizing write and I just love the background...
    From SlightlyTwisted


  • Claide
    January 11, 2005
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    Haha, I really enjoyed this. This will put me to sleep wearing a smile .


  • Cynicism101
    January 6, 2005
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    Thanks for your really nice comments on that poem I did - somehow school got in the way of life (as it does) and I never looked at any of your stuff until today. Well, I'm impressed. I love short poems that have a lot of stuff packed into them - maybe it's being an environmentalist. Anyway, "watching us from an invisible dimension" is great - just a little bit funny, just a little thought-provoking (who has the power if only one side can see the other?).

    I'm hoping some of your other stuff has that fantastic mix of camp and sarcasm...my favourite two things.


  • Wildequill
    August 11, 2004
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    That's a classic friend! Very well presented and well padded (anti-flack) - love the under-tone... (and the overtones).
    It's funny that they think it's funny..! hehe.

  • lady azure
    May 9, 2004
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    that was so adorable! i love how it's short, sweet, has a sense of humor, and still has a moral type deal going on. very rad.

  • honeybe
    April 26, 2004
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    that was wonderful. very different. loved it. keep it up. latter Honeybe

  • Jxshakespeer
    April 26, 2004
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    WOW!
    SO much said in so few words.
    Great job and lol I love the lil alliens in your author comments box.
    Jacquie


  • lordoftherings gold member
    April 26, 2004
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    someone kidnapped an alien from yourlist...what a twist to think -- thought-provoking at its best and very simply done and yet charged
    Edited on Apr 26, 10:31 because ''.

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