RAINBOW
Beautiful ray
Bending, stooping, arching
Violet, indigo, yellow, red
Peaceful
Author notes
Written April 25th, 2004
A contest entry
- One Hour Cinquain Contest by Ava Noire.
300 points, ended April 25, 2004, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Short and very beautifully written. Rainbows are like dreams. We just have to follow them and where they lead us!!
Return the favor and read "Dare to Dream"
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Nice and decriptive about a wonderful thing... rainbows..a beautiful promise.. Great poem
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I really like the image you draw about your rainbows. It's amazing that everyone to get six syllables have to use '-ing' endings, grits teeth over this!
Edited on Apr 25, 1:44 p.m. because ''. -
Jx this is very nicely done with the colors makes a brilliant touch! 
good luck! rock on...aimee jo
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Rainbows are beautiful indeed. Lovely cinquain here. The form appears to be correct. Thanks for entering
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