Green eyed beauty with golden hair,
Tough as nails, she'll take any dare.
She is a lively woman with a ready smile,
Always listening if you need to talk for awhile.
She is funny as a clown, sense of humor to boot,
She can leave you in stitches, her own horn she won't toot.
She is just like Dr. Doolittle with her own little zoo,
When it comes to animals there's nothing she can't do.
She can check their heartbeat or help them give birth,
Always smiling, she is filled with mirth.
With her gentle touch, she knows just what they need,
Whether it's giving them medicine or changing their feed.
She has a quiet strength, that draws people near,
My Aunt Patty is who I speak, to me she is a dear.
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I love you Aunt of mine
Written April 23rd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Love for Family by mitchybaby.
400 points, ended May 11, 2004, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I liked this cute dedication! You two are so close you can't see the divide between you!!! HUGS! Wonderful! Good luck in the contest! Dari x
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fantastic write which flowed well. Best of luck in the contest. Chris
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Is your aunt a veterinarian? I always dreamed of becoming one. Awesome write, it was cute yet satirical. Good luck in the contest
sincerely,
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Sounds like aunt Patty would be a kick for the kids to visit. You did a great job discribing her, and her critters.
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A wonderful tribute to Aunt Patty! Just from reading this I can tell I would just love her to pieces
She sounds like one hell of a lady and a great friend to you as well as only your Aunt. Animals know the good people in this world. I always trust in that. I really loved this piece hun and I'm sure your Aunt will too.
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Lovely
Thanks for critiquing mine!!! This is really good, you put a perfect image of your aunt in my mind, she sounds like a wonderful woman. Good work with rhyming!!!! -
not even seen any of my aunts or uncles in years - a good wave, love poem to you aunt.
chocolate la la la i am still hungry - just had some fruit but i want a tree with more tins on
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Such love and respect come shining through this one Queen. You are one lucky woman to have someone that special in you life. As I see in the comments above...she has seen it. Hey! I have an idea...I'm adoptable! LOL j/k Great work Queen.
Hugs,
Willow -
great tribute
girl can you loan a sister some of these wonderful folks you have surrounding you.i was almost convinced there were no great people left in a family unit.you guys are the ones who should be cloned.are you sure you are not a fairy tale.you are a best-seller that's for sure. -
GREAT JOB ..........
THANK YOU BARB, THIS MEANS MORE THEN YOU KNOW
IAM PROUD TO CALL YOU MY NICE
and you did such a great job of putting it together
I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART
YOUR AUNT PATTY
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This is really sweet Barb! Mom is ganna cry! I love her with all my heart.She is awesome with animals.(Animal whisperer)..lol...
Tammy33
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that so sweet!
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fantastic, i loved raeding it. Your Aunt sounds awesome, lucky you. I think you should show her what you wrote if you already havent..
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