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Seeing the world from above...

I felt the wind rushing beneath me,
as you carried me along with your wings of love
so high above everything I know,
I was scared of falling
(even further in love with you)...

I closed my eyes and smiled
while the butterflies danced in my stomach
as you lifted me higher and higher
to where I could not come down from...

I have watched the world from far above
(my head up in the clouds)
hearing nothing but the wind
rushing past my ears
as I hold onto you so tightly
scared that if I let you go...

I'll have to return
to standing on my own two feet
without the clouds floating around me
without the elation
of holding onto something (imaginary)
as I fly with a smile on my face

on the wings of love...

Author notes

I've liked the same guy for a year and a half (and a few days...lol...) and i have had periods of amazing happiness in that year and a half when I felt like I had never really lived before...such an amazing feeling...

but I realize that he might not like me back...so my happiness came from pretending that he might like me back  ...hence some of the stuff in brackets...

I hope you like  When I saw this contest title...I immediately thought of the song "On the wings of love" by Clay Aiken which i LOVE!

kayla*
Written April 22nd, 2004

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  • lost star
    April 23, 2004
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    this is good, well done... thanx for entering!
    good luck i will be judging tomorow!

    xx becca xx

  • d34d-s0u1-666
    April 22, 2004
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    hee hee hey kayla!!!! thats good lol