~Tooth Fairy~
When Puppies loose their teeth I say
Puppy lay your furry head
Down upon your flea filled bed
Close your eyes and go to sleep
Itchy-itchy flea's please leap
When Kittens loose their teeth I say
Pussy-Pussy curl your head
Underneath your arm in bed
Close your eyes and go to sleep
I’ll take your tooth, the mouse you keep
When little Monsters loose their teeth I say
Monster lay your ugly head
Down upon your retched bed
Close your eyes and go to sleep
Go to sleep you scary creep
When little Children loose their teeth I say
Precious Child please lay your head
Down upon your warm soft bed
Close your eyes and go to sleep
Drift off calmly while counting sheep
When Adults loose their teeth I say
Grownup lay your in dept head
Down upon your credit-card bed
Close your eyes and try to sleep
The Dentist’s Bills are in a heap
~FifthDove~
Author notes
((Monsters need to brush their teeth more often))
Written April 22nd, 2004
In a list
What did you think
Comments
1 - 12 of 12
-
Hood-Winked!
This is so cute!! Yes we all need to brush our teeth more often. My little girl loves to brush her teeth she is only 3 now but you can't get her to give it back at times. But I guess that is a good thing though. She really does a great job too. I love this write, thanks for sharing my friend
Theresa
-
Thank you
-
mm-mm!
thanks for the comment!
Oh I really like this one! -
Two Paws up
He he he he everything weaves itself together like thred in embroidery! It all fits together in a colorful shceme of imagination! Beautiful, yet funny adorable poem
-
Amusing
Hehe. That was cute. Maybe the toothfairy will get me to go see the dentist more often for my cleanings! :-P -
amazing work great poem Keep it up
-
Fun!
What a cute poem. Refreshing to read! I am anxious to read more. -
cute!
i love this poem! its so childlike yet adult in the same way.. absolutely adorable as poetryality said! you are a remarkable poet! congradts on all your trophies. keep up the good work -
This poem is adoreable. This is one I am sure my grandson would love. He likes bedtime stories and this poem would surely suit his fancy. Such a delight to read and enjoy. Thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you.
Renee
-
This is sooo cute! I love it!!! I will read it to my kids.You should write a childrens book! Good luck in the contest!
Tammy33
-
amazing
I brush my teeth constantly i still get cavities. The tooth fairy never comes to see me. I liked this very much. Queen
-
Wow this reads like ti should be in some kind of childrens book it is breathtakingly cute amazing. Keep it up.
Adding your comment:
1 - 12 of 12
