by Gregg Rowe
If I could love my mother
like when I was a child
Then all would be forgiven
Yet today,
I will just accept
To walk a million miles
Just to see her smile
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Written April 22nd, 2004
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i like my mom and this is a great thing to write to your mom so she knows shes appriciated, my dad howevr i will not go into , i will just say this is a great poem and leave it there
laura -
the hardest thing is to continue to give of yourself, when you receive little in return.
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smiles that says it all right there...I truly would give anything to see my mother smile.
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My apologies...I got some funny ones, changing into winnie the pooh, taking pants off, putting on red muscle t-shirt, jumping up and down on bed, let's play, let's play PS: Remind me not to send this whole page to my mother for Mother's Day...she would think I had a teddy fetish or something
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you are giving me chills with these sad mommy reads this morning, Gregg.
I think we need a cup of cocoa together...cuz now i have the bluesy blues.
So much emotion in so few words.
UB
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*KOTC*
That is devotion, Gregg. I'm sure your Mother would smile at these loving words, she couldn't help but smile. Heck! You make me smile
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AWWWWWW Greg.this is so heart wrenching I do so hope it happens for you my friend
Love to you~Joan
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