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Loser: It's true, I am

It's true,
I am
But aren't we all in some way?
No? Okay...

High school
Is hard.
If you say it's not, you're lying
Because there's no denying

That to be yourself is a cardinal sin
And I am a capital offender
Because I refuse to give in
I don't want to be a pretender
(I don't know how to be a pretender)

And the world sees a strange girl
And they mock and abuse her
The world sees a loser
It's true, I am
A loser!

Author notes

um, this is from my musical which I am totally writing!!!
it isn't quite finished...

What say you?

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  • Blue Apple Pi
    December 18, 2009
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    Macte well done. (BTW Macte means well done in latin) Who's ur loser? Kidding. Keep writing more for your musical!


  • Discoveria silver member
    December 12, 2009

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    I think you just need a good orchestra, some backing dancers, and a plot - and you'll be a Broadway success!


    • Obani
      December 12, 2009

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      sigh. plot? that sounds like work...
      It's nice to see you, by the way