by Gregg Rowe
forty below out
frosty the snowman frozen
snowbirds have flown south
Author notes
Written February 12th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- My 2nd contest with two choices. by UnhookTheStars.
444 points, ended April 23, 2004, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In the Bleak Midwinter by Little Miss Mozart.
335 points, ended November 25, 2006, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I agree with Unhookthestars' comment, that it is very tranquil and lovely. I think it was a little short, but whatever. I liked it.
And the picture is sweet. I LOVE Christmas trees.
Great haiku, good luck in my contest.
Katey
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I love snowbirds and the whole idea of everything freezing over and being all pretty, sparkly and cold. The idea that the cold cannot be touched, cannot be tainted and stained unpure.
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I like it. Evokes a lonely yet very peaceful feeling in the heart. Great haiku. thanks for entering and good luck.
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