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What Can Ya Say?

Funny...
I remember those times that we've had
some good... some bad
But that's life for ya
No one has said that life would be perfect
you take all the memories
and throw them together
like experiments
and see what you come out with
never knowing the end result
until it happens and then you deal with it and go on
it's like a road you travel on
you never know what's at the end
until you get there
but sometimes it's like good old fashioned wisdom
that's told which some refuse to listen to.
What can ya say?

Dec. 7, 2009

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  • Justice Morton
    February 6

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    What can you say? What can I say? This was so insightful.
    " it's like a road you travel on
    you never know what's at the end"
    For ome reason these lines stuck with me. Maybe because I have been questioning my existance big time and Its been bothering me. Whatever it is, this made my night. Thank you for sharing,

    ~Justice~


  • emporesskelee
    January 8

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    "You never know what's at the end til you get there" that's my favorite line. This is so sweet and I love the simplicity of the emotion, the way you did this was perfect! Love it!


  • Overlord Darklight
    January 5

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    Lord Sidewinder.

    ...not a fave of mine, this one. You do
    have some good old fashioned wisdom.
    I can see that, to be certain. Bill...
    Not a fave. But your voice is interesting.

  • Beautiful Vulgarity
    January 4

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    Ah. Yet another thought provoker. While its true that life isn't perfect, it can be. In my mind at least. Perfection is what you decide it is. Just as, life is what you make it. There is nothing to be said for the the things in life that don't end as well as we'd like. However, there's much to be said for waking up with a smile every day and doing your best to make it a better day than the one before.


  • Thoughtful Seeker
    December 20, 2009

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    Great write!!

    I really liked this poem. I used to be bummed when I was younger about the things that made my life less than perfect. I used to think if only this was one way everything would be great, but now I've learned that imperfections make life more challenging and interesting. Keep up the great work, and have a great holiday!! Jani


  • MelissaluvzSheila silver member
    December 18, 2009

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    Wow. This was just pure amazing. I am really not for sure what to say other than I enjoyed it. Thanks for the good read. keep up the good work!


  • Naughtygrlred
    December 8, 2009
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    I have nothing to say, i think u summed most of it up.

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