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Ethereal


Release me now
I'm dying
Drunk with sorrow
Until I breathe no more

Can't fix me now
I'm not a thing
Not a machine
Can't replace my heart
There are no spares
I erode

Do not despair
I'm barely here
Invisible
I am essence
Ethereal
Shall I dissipate?

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  • blueyez
    December 11, 2009
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    short and to the point