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get me out of here!

stuck inside this place on such a pretty day
oh woe is me who must sit here upon this chair and whimper and count the minutes and hours anxiously as they go racing by
oh won't someone get me out of here?
waiting for a simple sound
waiting for a simple ring
waiting for the bell to ring
why oh why won't the school bell ring?!
waahhh!!!
~brrrinngg~
~brrrinngg~
yay!
school's out for today!
now let's go play!!
thank the dear kind person who let that blessed school bell ring

Author notes

wrote it while i was in school posted it while i was in school,and although school is boring it's still educational.
Written April 20th, 2004

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    April 20, 2004
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    beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

    thanks i wrote it in about five minutes or something,poetry always on my mind.

  • April 20, 2004
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    lol, this is great, at the beginning I thought that you was inside becuase you was grounded or something like that and you dont realise that you are actually in a lesson at school, jsu treally bored. lol, well done, this should be in the weird catogorie or humor, lol

    pinkwhite