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Walking Alone

A girl walking by herself along the hall
Wearing all black with her hair hanging on her shoulders
Does anyone know that girl?
The answer is of course not
Why do you think she's walking alone

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  • Adamastor
    December 25, 2009

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    Because there's nobody else there to see her.

    Dear I am Ghost,
    Evening there, and Merry Christmas from Adamastor. I think the title of the comment has pretty much summed up both the questions here. There isn't much more I can say on this one.

    I shall give you a score of one on this one, since I cracked the code, and you failed to put a question mark at the end. Other than that, it was a fine piece.

    Happy Writing
    Adamastor

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    • I am Ghost
      December 25, 2009
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      Hi! Thanks so much for the comment! I really appreciate any comments I can get. And a Merry Christmas to you too!