The longing tears that rush release
Empty fears that invade our peace
Meloncholy. Passionate disspassion
Death in darkness, now defind in fashion
Nothing. Something. Anything thats real
Pain to be alive, then alive I must feel
Illusion paints pictures beauty and plain
Reasons can not balance equal love and sane
Love, the heart what wills, will twist the mind
Lost to want and wonder while faith is left behind
Somewhere in its depth, in darkness sinking still
A blade is driving deeper what love was meant to kill
Sharpest clarity. The heart recalls wounds to wait
Love is now a demon seed to plant the need to hate
The sweet now bitter. Swallow back the tear
Silence screams in echoes no one wants to hear
Waste what words was love so earnest spoken
The heart is shattered dagger left by what is broken
Hate remains with tears unspent by what we please
Love is now the Hate that Love died upon her knees
Author notes
http://freaky665.deviantart.com/art/tears-in-the-wind-92678372
Robert borders Feyfalen1
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest ~ Dark Writes ~ :: Twenty Poets :: by Antoinette Amour.
500 points, ended December 5, 2009, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well, what do you think?
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This is a fantastic poem, I only ask for the link and your name in the AN. The grammar is on the dot, your imagery is good...It's a beautiful write, I'm amazed how you got this from the prompt.
Very well. 
Good luck to you in my contest.
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thank you!
I always relate myself to every subject that i write about. I look for myself in others...
To know another you must know your own heart.
I feel every word I wrote.
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