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Let's Do It Again

Fucked up for the the fourth time today
Out of smokes, beer, and food again
Using whatever friend I can for a buzz, I am
Relaxed out of my mother fucking mind

Two large pizzas devoured, along
With a case of beer
Everyone is half passed out
Nothing left for me
To do but drink and get higher...
You start it all over tomorrow

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Written April 19th, 2004

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  • Intravenous Jesus
    July 29, 2007
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    Yep, done that! Can't wait to do it again either. Thanks for entering.


  • RollingStone silver member
    May 23, 2004
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    been there, done that, but escaped.

    I love the background!


  • bambie k2004
    May 2, 2004
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    Oh my whisper...I never thought...LOL Hehehe Great Job!! I had to laugh..It's just so UNLIKE you..It is wonderful..I had to share it with my husband..Neat idea..Much love
    Bambie


  • candy177
    April 21, 2004
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    I haven't been stoned in years...and it will stay that way! Not my favorite, but I did like the pizza bit lol


  • Clyde1023
    April 21, 2004
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    HAHAHA...this rocked!


  • Cemetery Rose
    April 20, 2004
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  • Jillosophy
    April 20, 2004
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    I had some mixed feelings here. Funny, 'cos it is. And nothing feels funnier that bein' stoned to the bone. Very real-I remember, vaguely, days\weeks just like this. Right down to the pizza and the pass out. Course, I had to quit all that when I discovered that I didn't need any help being stupid!
    Sad-(not only because of the secret)because the writer almost seems hopeless. Like, this scenario won't ever change so why even bother. Stuck in the loop, just "Using whatever friend I can for a buzz". Maybe this is way off the mark, but it's how I'm seeing it(through depression glass lenses)!
    Good writing, not suprised though.
    Jill

  • teraswu
    April 19, 2004
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    The circle of life, you captured that essence. : )


  • FlawedDestiny
    April 19, 2004
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    This is very different than what I usually read from you which makes me think maybe I need to look around your poetry more. I used to be able to identify with this poem, but not any longer. It's good though, it does remind me of many years ago. Thanks for reading my poems and good luck to you in this contest.
    -MISTY-


  • My Darkness
    April 19, 2004
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    This is really funny actually...i like it, you are getting better and better at these things... anyway great job and good luck in the contest..

    take care

    -Stac-


  • Talia
    April 19, 2004
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    LOL

    I can remember getting stoned just before I went to step aerobics you can guess I didn't get much of a work out. Very good piece

    Natalia

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