Sex on loves blanket, two lovers entwine
as the sun shifts and the moon makes its way
We french kiss enjoying the tongues foreplay
as fingertips caress soft curves divine
Each nipple erect and bound by loves twine
as colored rods entice lovers to play
Sex on loves blanket, two lovers entwine
as the sun shifts and the moon makes its way
Faces are buried in a sixty-nine
simple breathing becomes carried away
Hungrily they suck bringing forth lusts spray
as they indulge on the pouring of wine
Sex on loves blanket, two lovers entwine
Author notes
Rondel
A French form consisting of 13 lines: two quatrains and a quintet, rhyming as follows:
ABba abAB abbaA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats.
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this is VERY hot.. and obviously written with some technical skill too : )
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Mmmmm I really really like this one. Had me wanting to taste something right now. Very very hot for such a short form. You know all the right words SH
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Love the write. Had to smile at "We french kiss enjoying the tongues foreplay" A charming kind of line within a very hot poem. Short write but arousal not short.
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A great French form!
...but never long enough
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Good rhyme
I think you did this one especially with good rhyming scheme. Great work. -
You have always been able to bring the heat to any new form you attempt, beautifully done, of course
Love
Jeff
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Steamy and sensual as beach blanket bingo amongst the dunes of love. Always amazing how well you can do these over and over and over again.
nicely done once more for the ten thousandth time.
love ya,
Len
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