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~A Moment With Her~

Longing for her touch,
Always in my dreams.

Needing to be close to her,
Bodies entwined together.

Breathing in her pharemones,
Embracing her so dear.

Gently touching her face,
Running my fingers through her hair.

I want her lips against mine,
Falling into bliss.

Wanting nothing in the world,
Then a moment just like this.

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  • light to a dreamer
    November 30, 2009

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    What good word use and good flow. I like the way you have mad this flow and run out with such hope and longing. Thank you for the read it was well worth it.


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 27, 2009

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    Aww this is a beautiful write you have a great way with words. You appeal to the readers fantasy and heart always but in ways that are not impossible. If that makes any sense Great write hun!!