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A Peculiar Love Poem



I
Am
Being
Presence
In her presence.

I am   Awareness   I am
I am   Love   I am
I am   Surrendered   I am
I am   Safe   I am
I am   Alive   I am

Doubt cannot
Reach that place.
Negativity cannot.

There is

Only gratitude.
Only grace.
Only
What
IS
.




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Written April 19th, 2004

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  • Sharon Corr gold member
    September 20, 2004
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    You play your divine melodies
    O lovely is your joy
    There is only what IS
    Timeless Perfection

  • JoyBeingNow
    April 19, 2004
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    Peaseeker~
    If I can convey that to you, I'm more than happy. Thank you
    Edited on Apr 19, 5:46 p.m. because ''.

  • JoyBeingNow
    April 19, 2004
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    Gennelle~
    I'm really grateful that you and I speak the same language.. LoveAwarenessNow. Thank you for reading

    ~Uwe
    Edited on Apr 19, 5:47 p.m. because ''.


  • Maatkara gold member
    April 19, 2004
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    Speechless
    Communion of Hearts IS
    Bliss in the Now

    Love, is the only thing we can give away completely
    and lose nothing.

    ~ Gennelle


  • MargaretG
    April 19, 2004
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    Satisfying

    I get a feeling of warmth and security in her presence. I like the first part, with the synonyms for existence which you may feel only with her. This is what love should be. Thanks for this feeling.
    Edited on Apr 19, 11:01 because ''.

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