*Verse*
Hear me, I won't be foresaken,
Hear me, My Vcengence will come,
Hear me, Feel my hate,
Hear me, I can taste your fear!
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You can't remember me, but I remember you,
You dare to challenge me when I don't challenge you!
I think this will be too easy for me,
I think i'll set myself free!
She dares to go on and attack me?!
She Knows that God doesn't favor me!
And yet she will beg one day,
Begging me not to throw her away
*verse*
Why do you lie to me?
Why do you f**k with me?!
You know who I am,
And yet you don't understand,
Can you comprehend me?
Can you understand me?
I belive it is time,
yes! the moment is prime!
*verse*
WHAT 'BOUT ME NOW? (note, this part is in a deep demonic voice i can do lol)
Do I have you scared?
WHAT 'BOUT ME NOW?
Are you regreting my pain?
WHAT 'BOUT ME NOW?
Do I have you scared?
WHAT 'BOUT ME NOW?
What 'bout me NOW?
*verse*
Author notes
eh...its from the heart...but it ain't like imma do something stupid LOL
Comments
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Chills
Not something you see me reading often so My opinion might not mean anything to you. But, I like it, it is dark and chilling and the words go perfectly with the idea of the thing...
1-10 I'd say a 7
Keep up the writing!
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thanks
i understand...it ain't your thing!
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This poem is highly personalized and written for the mere purpose of getting feelings out with little regard to poetic deliverence. It is somewhat hard to comment on because this poem has been so highly personalized. Nevertheless, I did enjoy reading it. I hope any sorrow you have drips down the drain. Aperson can ejy these types of poems but this is almost entirely written for emotional reasons- your emotions, so, in that regard I think it was very good. Keep writing.
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thanks man...
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