I watched as you slowly slipped away;
Into darkness, the clouds creating a blanket.
Hellos were long lost but goodbyes always remained forever.
Like a scar I always knew you were there,
Itching at me, eating at me, trying to find an answer that you just couldn’t find
You cared for me, shown me the...right way to live.
But now you’ve faded into nothingness
A pure shield of missing you and hatred has crept over me
And in silence alone at night I weep for you; knowing your return will never happen.
Determined I hope for you to come back; steal my heart.
I loved you, I cared for you, but the love has faded
I also fear our friendship has done this, is doing this and will possibly remain so.
Until all is lost. And I sigh upon tears of sadness, weep at the sight of a broken heart. Scream at the rejection and hate I feel for not getting you back like I dreamed of so deeply.
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This is true.
Please comment I really appreciate it! 
This is how I feel..
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You know I am here for you, right? That if you ever need to drop me a message and just let me know that you are upset, you can do it? Because you know I won't ever judge the situation...
Feel better Sweetie. Let me know if I can do anything to help ya.
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Awwh thanks Hopefully I'll speak to you later cause right now I'm getting ready for school -sigh- Have a good day!
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awuh
très très triste ma belle ami
ignore my random burst of french >.<
very very sad my beautiful friend =]
mows.
je vous aime (i love you- the posh way
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haricot (bean XD)
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Awwh eheheh. Thanks Bean.
Ich liebe du! <3
German
lols. I lover you anyways <3
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im listening to a german song right now!
yay for my german teacher ripping me and holly a CD of a band we like that does both german and english songs XD
=]]
lovers you too.
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Ahhaa
Tokyo Hotel do German and English, my german teacher put them on when was studing media lols. >.< xD
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haha
yes
im listening to tokio hotel XP
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Hah I dont listen to them >.> (Hence the reason I cant spell the stupid band name xD) muwhahas.
Love you more :] cause im like that
awesome see!
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haha
i didnt
till Holly got me into them >.<
nuu
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Lols oh eheheh!
Awwh wow... guess what..........
Aye feel loved. <3 ahaha.
But I lover you more then you'll ever know cause beans rock ya see xD much loves!
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what?
<3
i know beans rock
so i love you the same.
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Lawls ahha yeahs <3
MUCHLOVE *secretly still loves yew more* muwhaha ;]
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Marvelous. Simply marvelous.
I like the way it is put, and it definitely strikes a chord of familiarity. It is very good.
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Awwh thankyou :]
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nooooo too sad! Its great cuppycake but i feel the pain too real in my own heart, i know this all too well. I wish and hope your broken heart can heal.
Huggles
Luff u <3
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Awwh thankchoo! <33
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Oooh <3
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Mmhm! <3
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touching
it was very moving and touching almost like a story of finding love and then losing love truly touching poem when reading it it's like you are right there in the room whilst all this is happening you can feel the pain passion the part that i liked the most was
But now you’ve faded into nothingness
A pure shield of missing you and hatred has crept over me
And in silence alone at night I weep for you; knowing your return will never happen.
i love this part best because it tells how you can love some one but hate them at the same time for leaving you very nicely done would love to see moor of your work in the future bless it be xx
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Thankyou very much for the comment!
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