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Eyes so cold.
So hateful and deceiving.
Resting in the body
of a divine one.

How I care and love.
Those whom which have lost
Their lives and souls
to the beast within.

To be you is like a living death.
How you survive each and every breath.
I wish to die and save my soul
Selfishness will be my end I know.

This secret is too hard.
I've kept it so long.
My heart is breaking.
Ending is coming to this song.

How little you know.
Of living this life.
How much you care
for hiding sight.

Be gone. Go away.
I'll live, I'll die.
Just not today.

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It sucks bad I know. sorry

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  • Aurelia Rose
    December 8, 2009

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    To be you is like a living death.
    How you survive each and every breath.

    The third stanza was the best. Nice message.

    Thanks for entering my contest.

  • PoliteFailure
    November 26, 2009
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    It does in fact not suck