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[March] - dreams.





We pray for forgotten moments. We wish upon dead stars that hopes and dreams may sometime come true but never accept that they will; because reality never works that way.




In unguarded moments we fall and reach out to those who our heart holds dearest. Sometimes; they ignore you or simply are to blinded to the lies that you won't actually hit the bottom. But we don't ever let go to those who can actually hold us strong; that don't give us a reason to collapse under the weight of the world and can see over fake feelings and aren't afraid to ask "What's wrong and don't you dare lie."





Love is a curious thing. It makes you laugh, cry. Makes you question the sanity of oneself. But one thing, for certain that I know -


I would never change
him.











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  • it is what it is gold member
    January 11

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    I dream, I dream to write like you.
    What more could I fucking say?

    I don't normally swear.
    But after reading your poetry I want to swear.

    Because your poetry is beautiful and it makes me happy that someone can write in such an amazing way.


    How that all relates to why i swear I have no idea.

  • Nikonic Freak silver member
    December 7, 2009

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    "Love is a curious thing. It makes you laugh, cry. Makes you question the sanity of oneself. But one thing, for certain that I know -


    I would never change him."


    wow.
    just wow.
    this is amazing.


  • the-hurricane-girl
    November 30, 2009

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    Lovely

    wow this was really deep and open
    Takes you through alot of the good and bad of love.. so true and well described that this is very emotive and easy to relate to.
    i love the way your 'rambles' all end in a really powerful line that just brings it all together lol, these may just be your thoughts but alot of powerful points there and very skillfully written.. xx


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 26, 2009

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    damn. I wish I was as poetic as this when I had random thoughts


  • Sir Squigglim
    November 26, 2009

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    It's gorgous.


    And perfect.


  • lyrebird
    November 26, 2009
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  • sepia stars
    November 26, 2009

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    Love is a very curious thing >.< And it does make a person laugh, cry etc. This was very well stated. I liked it I thought it was very good honestly. And the last part just fits the whole piece together nicely! ^_^


  • polkaa
    November 26, 2009

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    Love is a curious thing. It makes you laugh, cry. Makes you question the sanity of oneself. But one thing, for certain that I know -
    i would never change her
    how could the random thoughts of a rambler be so bloody relatable ?


  • Never.Give.Up
    November 26, 2009

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    This is really pretty angel... And for it being ramblings it made alot of sense.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best ideas for the future

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