A dawn
wiping off all stars
that shined for days lived,
a crisp air
teasing hair,
as eyes stare without memories,
eager to make some.
A smile spreads
stirred with filtered joy,
fresh dreams,
unconquered hope
swells in heart-
a life
to love.
Author notes
What is the Future, without the past
A contest entry
- Quickie by Sandra R Reynolds.
600 points, ended December 9, 2009, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice imagery and a good write! Congrats on your Silver dear!
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Thank you so much for your warm wishes...
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great write and imagery like the way a smile spreads...best to you in the contest
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I really loved this! I felt those moments described.. and I agree with your ANs.. we must embrace the past to move forward to the future!
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a life
to love.
always
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always, but often forgotten...sometimes by self, sometimes by others...
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