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Beautiful Perfection {runs only skin deep}



Had time yet again ran out?







Trembling hands were strewn out upon the icy metal instrument, just waiting for the perfect moment of destruction.





Head bent down in agony, he hid his glowing crimson eyes in shame of what the monotonous centuries had formed of him.

 

 

 

 

 

 Porcelain cheeks once so smooth and pale, were now cracked and stained with the permanence of spilt blood.

 

 

 

 

 

Mind racing through each and every murder- the proud mother, the friendly old man, and even the innocent young child that smiled when she told him he had "pretty fangs".

 

 

 

 

 

Years and years of solitary killings had finally brought unto him

the ramblings of a wicked soul and an undead heart.

 

 

 

 

 

Venom trickled out of his eyelids as he sat in remembrance of the eternally dammed souls he'd thrown into the pits of hell.

 

 

                                  It was such a pity.....

 

 

 

 

 

Knees weak, legs shaking, he slowly but surely stood up. For, it was time for him to proceed with what must be done if he were ever to have peace in his measly existance.

 

 

 

 

 

Trembling fingers once again grasped around the cool metal stake.

 

 

 

                                 Yes, it was time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 Eyes shut tight, fingers clenched, he thrusts the weapon- ending it all...

 

 

 

 

                                              

                                             for the human, at least.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Gurgling down the first fresh juice of the night, he let out a laugh and swept away into the darkness, stalking his next prey of choice.

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  • YAY! NO MORE SPARKLY VAMPS! Nesferatu ftw! xD

  • pinot
    December 9, 2009
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    fun little twist at the end,
    good read


  • glitterydoom
    November 27, 2009

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    yes.
    going back to dracula type vampires.
    vampires that kill and are dangerous and scary and murderes.
    not poncy sparkling vampires.
    =]]
    haha
    sorry
    tiny rant there
    i liked this
    alot
    good luck in the contest

    • MoonlitRoses
      November 27, 2009
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      Thank you!

      (I love all vampires. Sparkling or not Always have)


      Thanks for commenting and reading


      • glitterydoom
        November 27, 2009
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        your welcome

        i dont mind sparkly vampires but i prefer the dangerous, sexy murderous kind. ahaha. that makes me sound really..weird
        =]]


  • My Desdemona
    November 26, 2009

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    this was a freakin amazing poem, i love the creativity and the morbid descriptiveness of it, great write


  • feyfalen1
    November 25, 2009
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    Love It!!

    Loved it!!!


  • LordVampirEternal
    November 25, 2009

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    A very good write this is the kind of thing I was looking for good job and good luck in the contest.

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