Yesterday, I saw
the orchid tree
finally
blossoming
pink purple petals,
amazing
I'm grateful;
the beginning of
subtropical winter;
today
I'm thankful
for the rain.
A contest entry
- Perspective by Tresimskaslessae.
490 points, ended December 4, 2009, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~ in 25 words ~ by LavendeRFlameS.
600 points, ended December 12, 2009, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Remember to put in your authors notes how it ties into the contest. =D
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Great job. I really enjoy reading this although I did not understand the ending.
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Beautiful
More people should learn to give thanks instead of asking for things. 
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