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Coffee Shop (Love)

I'm sitting in the back of this coffee shop
Hoping against everything that time will stop
Because I'm not ready for the world outside
Yeah my phone keeps ringing but I push ignore 
I don't want to see what's in store for me, when I answer

Yeah and I sip my coffee and I dream

Chorus:

Yesterday, there was nothing
Standing in the way of our dreams
There was no hospital bed
No cancer looming over our heads
Yeah and I don't know if I can take this
I don't know what I would do
If I lost you

Walking down the hall towards your room
My hands are sweating, and I'm shaking
I really don't want to hear the news
But I suck up all the strength I have
Than I see you, and everything melts away
To a world with no problems, and no pain

Yeah and I dream

Chorus:

Yesterday, there was nothing
Standing in the way of our dreams
There was no hospital bed
No cancer looming over our heads
Yeah and I don't know if I can take this
I don't know what I would do
If I lost you

Yeah and I
Don't wanna die, without you
Yeah and I
Don't wanna cry, without you
Yeah and I
Don't want to, without you

I'm sitting in the back of this coffee shop
Hoping against everything that time will stop
Because I'm not ready for the world outside
Yeah my phone keeps ringing but I push ignore 
I don't want to see what's in store for me, when I answer

Yeah and I sip my coffee and I dream

Chorus:

Yesterday, there was nothing
Standing in the way of our dreams
There was no hospital bed
No cancer looming over our heads
Yeah and I don't know if I can take this
I don't know what I would do
If I lost you

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  • Faithfully Yours x
    November 28, 2009
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    AWh this was beautiful
    i love it and how you wrote it!!!!!

    thanks 4 entering
    best of luck


  • bree6453
    November 25, 2009
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    GREAT!

    You're undoubtedly AMAZING! good work


  • spideracer gold member
    November 25, 2009

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    I agree, very deep and moving. It is a poem that people can relate to and that's why people love this poem. Such feelings you've expressed here you should put to music. Take care and thanks for sharing.


  • crossingtharivrstyx
    November 24, 2009
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    sad

    Very deep! i can dig it man!Are u gonna set it to music?


  • Winter Wolf gold member
    November 24, 2009
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    Wow Kevin, this is really deep. I like it very much. It reminds me of someone I know...whos very special


  • Map Of Stars gold member
    November 24, 2009

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    Hey, this is pretty good! I've never read any of your songs or poetry before.. But I really like this, the story and tone, visuals - Great!

    Amber

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