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bloom

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butterflies gathered
beside honey bees

 

              and danced to
       the sound of dawn.

She

      rose from slumber,
laced her skin with
                    white

and urged wings
to rest just for a while

just so
the bride in bloom
could flourish

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image credit: butterfly bride by albertofoto


***11. bloom: do not write about a flower or about growing up.***

OR
comma: write about how much you hate punctuation. use as little of it as possible, but make it legible, please.

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  • Nikonic Freak silver member
    December 8, 2009

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    i love this and think it's great the way it is. sounds pretty finished to me. :]

    but if you want to add more, can you do it soon?

  • Topnotchsy
    November 26, 2009
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    Great imagery and take on prompt!!

  • Nikonic Freak silver member
    November 24, 2009
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    11. bloom: do not write about a flower or about growing up.
    OR
    comma: write about how much you hate punctuation. use as little of it as possible, but make it legible, please.