Pushing past self pity
And self help
I want out...
Author notes
Edited on the 24/11/09
removed the word home.
A contest entry
- 10 Words: Round 1 by crivanea.
400 points, ended November 24, 2009, 32 entries
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Comments
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thanks for the edit
a good revision
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quite a hopeful aspect in this write..although i wonder if home is a metaphor for something else ..and the word "home" is not permitted in the write

