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Once we danced

 

 

 

 

sensual.jpg sexy7 image by autumnfire39

 

 

 

 

 

Once we danced in sweet romance...

Ripples of desire ...

 

as you undressed

 

while I in full attire.

Left to regret ... it was by chance that we met.

serendipity  in its full swing,

 

I wish for the happiness it might one-day bring.

Remembering as my heart sings...

Though it is not that I would ever forget...

 

 

It is only that I regret...what could have been.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Welcome Back Mystic Blue!


Prompt 1:
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My thoughts are always for my Handsome Man, My Mason Grey in real life and co-writer.

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  • laura0757 gold member
    November 27, 2009

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    How romantic and with a your flair with words..omg..your comments are poetry in itself...so I just enjoy reading those...lol...this is a little hot.........a little sizzle at times creates a dribble..........just having some fun thats all....I know I am bad...........but I thank you so much..and how cute to put that little gold trophie under it............you made my day........I say no more...thanks so much with love from me to you sis..somewhere out in floriday where its sunny and hot..and me here sitting listening to the sound of that cool north blowing outside my door...but as I sit and look at my huge trees in my front yard and the trees are covered in an assortment of differnt colored led lights it calms me..I hear my winchimes..that hang from my huge King Crimson Maple which turns a deep crimson red in the fall...but I hear that snow is on its way...who knows time and the clouds will tell...but when that first white snow fall starts to collect and all you see is the soft glow of colour under the thick blanket ot snow.........then this just makes me want to sit by my window and stare...............Love as always
    your sis.....Laura.....that little trophie thingy migigy is so cute...and I am so touched that you would take the time to even read anything I write...for
    I go down heavy on my self...always have I suppose I always will....sometimes we wear our scars but people cant see them,,but I feel them....and they stay hidden in places in which I feel safe...for bad memories can play with my head...and Nov. 25 is the date of my sisters death I will never forget just how it hit me when I saw her on tha couch all by herself...and me looking donw at her...and thinking where did my sister go....because this is not her...not what I remembered any ways..and I got so used to seeing her so sick...the whole affair stunk..and the fact that her husband kept her in a crematorium for seven months and as I said her family never even being witness to her final resting place...he kept her there for seven long agonozing months and why ...because of one of the worst diseases of mankind,,,which is greed,,,and hate.....and spite.........and I can never ever forgive him,,,for someone to do this and to know that someone can be that cruel leaves me a little more than a little I will add disallusioned..

    I love saying and believing this for what comes around goes around....that is my solace and my friend for me...and its not because i am hatefull which i do not possess that hate so to speak but its because of whats fair..........so i in turn
    try and I fail but try again to watch my tongue think before I speak...and watch my questions that are self imposed, for something i have thought in the past..I know have without doubt come back to bite me in the ass and hard so I say ouch that really hurts...so I keep a close watch and a close ear to me...And as far as other's are concerned then I suggest they do the same for when that enemy comes it might just be you you are staring at..........all the best to you and so many gracious thanks.................Laura..............


  • chael
    November 25, 2009

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    What if ?

    What if passion were yours to command. What if you could sumond love at your desire. What if want was granted like some magic at your biding. Would any of it mean anything at all ?.....well done poet.....chael

  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 24, 2009

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    Such a loving romantic write
    Made me :: sigh :: beautiful penning
    sss David

  • MysticBlue
    November 24, 2009

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    This was so pretty and sensual. Yes, it seems that life is left with regret way too often when it comes to the heart. I hope you find happiness or have happiness already. Thank you for entering and good luck. This write is very nice.
    Marie


  • Antipodi
    November 24, 2009
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    Beautiful music in verse dear poet


  • Titus gold member
    November 23, 2009

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    by chance, a meeting brought from the ripples of reminisce? wow, those last two lines gave a reader the full meaning to each lovely moment. Then there it was, right in the middle with 'I wish for the happiness it might one-day bring.' the true beauty in waiting. Tony.

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