let's do a (little/bitter)
rushing through this if we (can/must)
i have things to (do/dream)
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inventive to say the least. you're clever.
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kevin, you are a haiku stud. this is an amazing poem and i really think that the line options are ingenious.
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i love the concept of the options at the end, especially cause the options are at either end of the scale.
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****stars
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Oh god, this is brilliant. I don't believe I've ever seen this done in poetry. Marvelous.
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