Tears always falling
From my face
Lost and forlorn
Heart tossing though life
Like a small boat
In a hurricane
Author notes
Prompt #1
A contest entry
- In Between Classes Quickie!!! Interested?? by AngelKat42.
800 points, ended November 25, 2009, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I see why you won a silver.. Heartfelt and dep! Great job!
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this one I felt deep within, goes straight to the heart. sits there, doesn't seem to move. How intense the pain is throughout this piece. You've said so much in few words. I knew you could do it. You've left me speechless, searching for the right words, but yet not finding them.
good luck
Kat
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oh sad this is
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Thank you; drift fences have always seemed the epitome of loneliness.
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