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It's My Fault Like Everything Else

Look in the mirror. Don't you
see it? Can't you feel it? Do you
even hear it? Everything is your
fault. The scars all over your body
it's your fault. I don't want to see it
no I do not want to hear it. Help I don't
want to feel it.

Remembering the pain. The abuse
he put me through. I'll sit here and
cry. I let him hurt me. Never said a
word for 9 years. I just thought I was
bad and God was punishing me for
something.

No longer am I able to sleep. I stay
up late. Wanting to be alone and not
to sleep. The fear he's there is constantly
there. I'm tired of people telling me it's not
my fault.

If it's not my fault then prove
it to me. Please show me it's
not my fault. Until someone can
truly show me. It's my fault like
everything else.

Is there any way I can improve the write? Plz be nice with giving your thoughts

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