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Love Poem Number 69

I can always tell what’s on your mind -
when you perk your eyebrow
in that cute little way.

I give you my coy smile that we both 
know is a sign of submission -
as I shake my head; no.

It's not long before I can’t stand the
thirst anymore - and I find
myself in a sipping frenzy.

Then an extraordinary chill shoots up
my spine as I realize that I am
being tasted as well.

The tighter you press your lips to me
the more I get lost and the harder
I work to please you.

                  Damn ...
I love it when you perk your eyebrow.

 

 

 

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 This was written for a contest. I realize that I can't enter anonymous contests, I'm too well known here on AP and I screwed up and replied to comments.  

Prompt: 69

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  • Dalaney gold member
    December 27, 2009

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    well, since it was my contest you took this out of, I should paddle you - but, you'd probably love that This is good and naughty - just like we are xoxoxox


    • Amera gold member
      December 28, 2009
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      I'm surprised yet so happy that you found this. Thanks Sis


  • traffic light gold member
    December 19, 2009

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    I love this - especially the ending, it gave it an original kick.


  • Echo Scorpio
    November 29, 2009

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    Awwwww :)

    Cute, romantic... Did I mention cute ?? ^.^ It is like when you try to resist (or at least cleverly play resistance) but the POWAH of that brilliant connection, that spark, is just too much


  • C.I.M.A Punk
    November 29, 2009

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    If an eyebrow can do all that, what can he do with the rest of his body?

    Anyway, I really like the last two lines of this poem.
    It surprised me in a nice way.

    Great job once again!

  • Mikexplore
    November 26, 2009

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    Really nice

    Beautifully written..ilove this part:'I give you my coy smile that we both
    know is a sign of submission -
    as I shake my head; no.'


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    November 26, 2009

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    Oh, so for him it’s an eyebrow. I ‘m a little more direct; I lick my lips…and sway back and forth in the middle of my top lip…real slow.

    Very ‘tastefully’ done Amera.

  • Megawatkins
    November 25, 2009
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    lol ^^

    That was good


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 25, 2009

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    Damn it - you've done it again - NOT entered a contest! I did, and I'm as easy to spot as you are, Sis. Honestly, you are an infuriating pickle! Now, how can we rectify this?

    • Amera gold member
      November 26, 2009

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      I asked Lane first; she ignored me so I realized it pissed her off.


      • Mairi bheag gold member
        November 27, 2009
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        Och away! There are days when she just doesn't talk to anyone. You're too sensitive (but it's part of what makes you adorable).


  • HaleyMary
    November 25, 2009

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    A beautiful poem you have written here, Sis. Powerful imagery as well as passionate emotion. I like how you left the poem open ended as well. Leaves a lot to the reader's imagination.


  • Ellegirl
    November 24, 2009

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    Regardless, you did a wonderful job on this poem. I'd be willing to bet
    this poem made someone very happy!


  • PerVirtuous
    November 24, 2009

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    Reminds me of old Madame Rue
    You know that gypsy with the gold-capped tooth
    She's got a pad down on Thirty-Fourth and Vine
    Sellin' little bottles of Love Potion Number Nine

    I found some in a telephone booth
    It made me crazy, to tell the truth
    I drank some cause I thought it was wine
    and lived love poem 69
    and it was ever so fine
    and she was truly divine
    I lived it line by blissful line
    reciting incoherently love poem 69


  • poetryality silver member
    November 23, 2009

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    Hahahahaha yes... that's all I got to say, and the best to you in the contest. Although, this one should make the judge "perk their eyebrow". I just did. LOL Loved it! Danced too! Hahahahaha Great!

    Renee

    • Amera gold member
      November 23, 2009
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      hehe, thanks but it's not in a contest; I just used a contest for a prompt.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    November 23, 2009

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    A delightful read ... but I wonder what it means if he twitches his nose!!!!!

    Very sensual and you left the interpretation to the reader ... I like that

    Love
    Sue


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 23, 2009

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    we all have that something that we can't say no too, for me it is a few things, lol , loved this poem and how it seems you leave it to the imagination of the read a bit, keep it flowing

  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 23, 2009
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    Yeppers love those
    you go on with your "pleasing you"
    Nawty n Nice ... Bravo


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 23, 2009

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  • Nisaba M.
    November 23, 2009

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    It's not the style of most of your stuff that I've read, so you can probably get away with an anonymous contest. I love the metaphor of an icy drink for a warm lover. After all, it's not as if I know who you are or anything ...


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 22, 2009

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    If it is anonymous why are you replying to your comments when nearly everyone knows your avatar

    Sensually delightful; you captured the scene of passion quite nicely here -
    hot and tender at the same time, I like the 'perk of the eyebrow'


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 22, 2009

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    Nawty!!! Hehe

    Very tasty indeed Sis... definitely works up the senses!! Damn fine erotica I say!!


  • malmadre gold member
    November 22, 2009

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    There is a whole new language in eyebrows, you speak it fluently!


  • Pure Thought
    November 22, 2009

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    Gotta love a tasty woman with a healthy thirst.

    I call that my come hither look.


  • Peteskid gold member
    November 22, 2009

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    Hmm..eyebrows......

    • Amera gold member
      November 22, 2009
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      hehe... hey! It's great to see you here. I don't write free verse that often.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 22, 2009

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    A lovely piece you have penned here.
    Indeed captures a whole new meaning

    well done poet
    best wishes in the contest

    Passionspromise

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