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Haughty Billows




Simple shimmers fracture haughty billows
influencing
dispersion
of radiant
glows
with
shadows
dissolving
hopelessness
Revitalizing a slumberous eve


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Reverse Double Tetractys

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  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    November 23, 2009
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    Wow, this is a form I haven't seen before. Very unique, I love it. You did an awesome job, thank you so much for entering my contest.