There used to be flowers on the sun,
little flakes of ice on my cheeks
and some scent coming from your way...
Though the same stars we still see,
the same sky shields our heads
but our eyes differ in the direction
they seek...
Love's a fragile song with broken words,
easy to go unnoticed,
easy to shatter
and though our sea has become
two separated rivers,
the obsession of fear lingers still
upon our hearts.
[Perfect things are just abnormal creations]
You were here, once,
A mere nothingness, a shadow upon
falling walls...
He was here, once,
a story with unfinished chapters
and lack for suitable words...
She was here, once,
just a dream that's lost its proper ending
and never awoke...
Love's a fragile song with broken words,
easy to compose,
hard to play
and even harder to be admited/accepted
by us, we broken fools...
Maybe [Myself] Loved him once....
But how would a broken fool,
like me,
ever know!
(C)Noor 11/22/2009
Author notes
Contest prompt: Maybe I loved him, once
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- Maybe I loved him, once by Randomly Beautiful.
400 points, ended December 8, 2009, 12 entries
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brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!
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THAT TERRIBLE EMPTY FEELING
The feeling you write so wonderfully about here is one which some of us have gone through. The heartache and sorrow which is left in our hearts and also the unanswered questions just keep us in tears and sadness. 
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Wow~
Powerful piece You have penned and Loved the way You brought
this forward to digest~ Emotions could be felt and Adore the Imagery
even though sad to inhale~ re: Love
but Beautiful take on the prompt You bring the Reader there
Woot~ Precious Spirit
Keep that quill & Mind dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice & Heart
Best wishes in the contest ~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Pretty gooood poem...had some meanng to it .. I liked it
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