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The End

Just a few more moments,
that's all that's left,
a little while,

Til my last breath.

I've been forgotten,
so alone i cried,
No one come near me,
for alone i must die.

I see the shadow,
of the rope,
the only solution,
when there is no hope.

I feel a tear,
trickle down,
if it was only enough,
To make me drown.

I feel so foolish,
why should i cry,
i know what i want,
I want to die.

I am ugly,
and I am weak,
I am stupid,
and I am meek.

I have no future,
I have no friends,
time for this,
all to end.

So watch me go,
and wonder why,
you could ever,
let me die.

The reason is,
that you don't care,
i was in pain,
and you weren't there.

I stand up tall,
I close my eyes,
I hold my breath,
so as i die.

You gasp with shock,
but its too late,
time is up,
But this is Fate.

So i am dead,
You stare a while,
at the dead girls,
creepy smile.

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Suicide

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  • WhisperInTheShadows
    December 26, 2009
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    you were right, mary. poems happen, then we look at them, and then we truly want to die.


  • XxHeartlesslifexX
    November 25, 2009
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    Thats a gorgeous, dark and creepy, but gorgeous poem ... I love it


  • zibs
    November 23, 2009

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    wow

    This is amazing...I so feel this way sometimes. I love the way you wrote it, and I got lost in the meaning. It made me feel like I was tere instead of feeling like I was reading a poem.
    It was really well done, I loved it
    Zib


  • memoriesofyesterday
    November 23, 2009
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    God is the answer....


  • pieces.of.me.
    November 22, 2009

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    Th e reason is,
    that you dont care,
    i was in pain,
    and you werent there.

    powerful words... made me cry


  • BloodstainedAngel
    November 22, 2009

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    To say that the words in this poem touched me is and understatement by far. I felt your words I feel your words as if they were my own soul speaking back to me. I have read a lot of stuff on here and by far this is the one I will come back to often just it is my absolute favorite!!!


  • xXChemical.CutterXx
    November 22, 2009
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    I liked it i sum times fell like this

  • secondside1
    November 22, 2009

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    Oh wow, I felt the emotion it was present in this poem and even though it was really sad, I did like it a lot. Good job. I look forward to finding other pieces by you.


  • MelissaluvzSheila gold member
    November 22, 2009

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    Wow such strong feelings and emotions flowing in and out of this nicely done piece. I enjoyed reading this. It was a very good take on the prompt. I am letting you go to round 5. Thank you so much for entering and best of luck too you in round 5.

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