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Ode to the Turkey (Haiku)

Who am I to say
  turkeys are so lambasted? 
I love tryptophan!

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  • azure85 gold member
    December 4, 2009

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    Yes, those tryptophans get us by the time the pumpkin pie is being served. What a yummy description of this great holiday, thank you so much for your Turkey-ku!


  • Peteskid gold member
    November 29, 2009

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    surely a modern version of a classic feeling, before any one knew the name the feeling was probably the same, full of something we thought was delicious...PK


  • katie marie silver member
    November 24, 2009
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    Mmmm. Add stuffing, potatos and gravy, and then of course the pumpkin pie. Nap time!


  • Ani Grace gold member
    November 22, 2009
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    I'll have a little more of the light now...
    ...and ...maybe...
    a little more of the dark...
    ...after my nap.

    ; )


  • Sound of Rain
    November 22, 2009
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    nice haiku!!!

  • aychellus gold member
    November 22, 2009

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    my first experience of haiku, i like , i like, a good giggle

    • M0ofi3
      November 22, 2009
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      Them giggles...

      ...taste a lot like turkey...just not fattening.


  • Cynewulf
    November 22, 2009
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    Very good. I like a turkey with a sense of humour myself.

    • M0ofi3
      November 22, 2009
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      ...and...

      ...cranberry sauce!

      Don't forget the sauce...

      • Cynewulf
        November 23, 2009
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        Of course. Especially that cranberry sauce with rum in it...


  • Ani Grace gold member
    November 22, 2009

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    Thanks for letting the rest of us join in your fun! ; )
    This will be posted on the Thanksgiving table this year...next to the sacrificed subject of your Haiku...Enjoy the holiday!

    • M0ofi3
      November 22, 2009
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      Would you care for white or dark meat?


  • faithwhisperer silver member
    November 22, 2009
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    How true, how true!!!


  • intanglio2ring
    November 22, 2009

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    (head falls off hand that was holding it)

    Uh Uh - Yep!
    I'm awake now - that turkey was loaded. (returns back to napping)
    Tang

    • M0ofi3
      November 22, 2009
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      I can almost see those alpha waves of yours.

      'Yawn!'


  • Warrior of Peace
    November 22, 2009
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    *giggles

    Its very cute

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