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What happend to You and Me?

Your face is like a cloudy day these days
When it doesn't rain
But when it pours

Still looking for that face
The one that makes the sun come out
And brightens my day

Where's the face that makes me want to laugh
Just because it's cute
And there's no frowned around
Just because you're around

Where's that smile you made
Just because I was right by your side

Was is it something I said?
That made you feel this way
Was is it something I did?
That made you change you're mind

Because we were perfected
In each other's arms
Kissing in the rain
And talking all night long

Holding hands while walking
Fighting, joking and laughing all away
You being my best friend
Before anything else.

Because we were perfect kissing in the rain
Laughing when the moon was bright
When the stars is all we saw

What happened to those days?
Where we dance while the sun came up
And the stars disappeared
And it was magic
Because you told me you loved me?


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  • DarkMist
    November 25, 2009
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    AWWWWW!!! that was so cute!!!!!