Through ink black skies hell desends upon Earth
Carrot shaped rockets loom against star-kissed night
Hippity hopping along in hob-nailed space boots
Grinding humaity under paw while continuoulsy giving birth
Cruel cabbage rays spew green rays of certain doom
Steel buck teeth chomping and rending flesh from bone
Horrid pink eyes burn with twisted bunny blood lust
Hare Tech weapons catch us in their telescopic zoom
Easter came early and there not carrying funny plastic grass
Betrayed by our heartbeats to demonic bionic wabbit ears
Humanity saddly reduced to so much wholesale Purina Bunny Chow
Seems their baskets are filled with loads of galactic whoopass
I shall hail and welcome their arrival to our little sphere
Better to be their well loved pets for amusement and mirth
I aint no bed-time snack for no interstellar cotton tail
I'll fluff their horrid green fur, not too much pride here
Long live the Rabbit King!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author notes
One too many beers. BURP. What the %$@* was that? Oh No!! Space bunnies, RUUUUNNNNN!!!!!
Written April 17th, 2004
A contest entry
- ~Choices, More Choices, and Pizza~ by neptune386.
300 points, ended April 18, 2004, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent
I like the way the humor developed. Started off with a more "serious" tone and contrasted with a humorous tone, giving more "punch". Your word choice is great. You have a vivid imagination and it clearly shows in this piece. Excellent job!!! BTW...watch the beer consumption. You never know when a space bunny might take advantage and lay you out on a kitchen table
~Kathy
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SIMPLY SAID.........I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT.
alyssa
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Funny YEAH
I thought I saw something green on screen last night! Oh my. And I had NO beer
Hope you get more than green in the contest.
Myra
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