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Elemental

She is a midnight river below the stars,
Sweeps through the starving plains, a gale
Of silken love and fury






















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Option: Picture 3, http://roseonthegrey.deviantart.com/art/Innocent-II-55140877

Now that I see the title of the picture, I guess my interpretation was a little off, but I hope you like it anyway.

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  • Linda Marshall
    February 6
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    Believe it or not, I like minimalist poetry as well as the more epic stuff.

    This is a stunning piece right out of the Imagist tradition and every word counts.

    It is evocative, precise and renders its subject perfectly.

    10 out of 10 for a miniature masterpiece!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 22, 2009

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~


    I like your take on the picture despite the title of it in three lines you engage me and sweep me away

    best of luck