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Tis thrice ye hast heard thunder
witnessed by lightning's hell
Brace thyself m' son against
life's dark stormy gales


'Til icy rains cease to dance
wipe thy eyes filled of mist
Hold-fast if thou be sunlight
love's bright hopeful wisp


Clear days cometh anon ye
shall shine once again
Tis nay end! 'pon this dire
stage art thee without sin?


Mend thy heart, go fishing
a beautiful catch awaits thee

 

Lady E

 

thy mother


Author notes

a note to her son encouraging him to find love

Does she love her son?

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    November 22, 2009
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    a mother's advice beautifully rendered.


  • JustAnEmoKid
    November 20, 2009

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    Wow this is very close to heart and the choice of lanuage used was very effective, well done