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Adoption

Find a baby you can love
Sent down from God above
Into your heart let them shove
Adoption equals Love

Children left out on the street
are sure trouble to somehow meet
They don't even have enough to eat
Adoption equals Love

So many babies left alone
with no place to call a home
Share love with them for they have none
Adoption Equals Love

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  • Yemassee gold member
    31 minutes ago
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    It's always sad that life cannot be perfect, A life where there is mom, dad and 2.2 children...plus a cat and dog. But it doesn't work that way and that is where kind people come into play, who can care and love those without parents.

    I want to be adopted.


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    2 hours ago
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    A child is a gift; no matter if it comes to you naturally or if God places the child in your home...a child is a gift

    You wrote this perfectly, sweet soul!
    A fine sharing it is!

    All the best to you!
    Sandy