A chilled wind scatters the clouds
that disguised the day's gray sky
a morning of cold rain did fall
as November welcomed winter's cry!
Sometimes falling in dizzy torrents
other-times a bare drizzle would fall
as time gave way to the lull of the day,
a steady falling November rain remained.
Yet hidden within the raindrops
was a secret of mother nature
a tiny ice crystal, a snowflake to be
as November gives way to winter's croon.
A contest entry
- November Rain by Heavenly Angel.
550 points, ended November 21, 2009, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very nice one
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Beautiful
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The only November rain poem I have is the time my father passed on 11/14/90 and it did rain much like in the way you described, I like the peek a boo effect of the snowflake as winter is about to be embraced. Excellent. Blessings.
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Very nice
I think you may have gotten your fingers a little over-excited
"Novermeber" ?
Ah well
A fine sharing this is; thank you for being part of the contest and good luck to you! -
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cant blame that on my computer...lol oh wait it's grey has Alzhimers mabye, I forgot.....lol have a blessed day.
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