My goal today
is to make you sweat.
I'll be the mistress
you be my pet.
Light bondage will be used
as I tie your wrists to the bed.
Then your feet are tied
And the blindfold goes around your head.
I climb on top
and straddle your waist.
You moan loudly as with my tongue
Your lips are traced.
Nibble gently on your bottom lip
before I whisper in your ear.
Let me know baby
when your orgasm is getting near.
Down your chest I move
my nails leaving behind a trail.
Tease the head of your cock
with my tongue, I hear you exhale.
Up and down both sides
and all the way around.
I tease and suck
and you whimper cause your bound.
I stop and get up suddenly
as you lay there wondering.
You can hear me moving in the room
moving around and plundering.
Then you feel a slight sting
as hot wax drips on your skin.
Followed by the sensation of my wet honey pot
as our fun does begin.
I slide you easily inside me
and slowly begin to ride.
The wax still drips
and you beg to be untied.
I lean forward to loosen the straps
blindfold hits the ground.
My tits are still in your face
nice and full and round.
You suck on my nipples
I grind hard but slow.
I can feel my juices
beginning to flow.
Leaning back to unstrap your legs
You flip me over without a sound.
And with a great urgency
you begin to pound.
We finally explode together
and collapse upon the bed.
Trying to catch our breath
with nothing being said.
Then I turn and whisper
my goal was to make you sweat.
Tell me did I reach my goal
Cause I made myself really wet.
Author notes
Not my best but working under pressure!
A contest entry
- Make me Sweat ( For all my favs) by Sector-Hunter.
1223 points, ended December 3, 2009, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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OK...now im a fan
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I think you did an incredible job under pressure! This was super sensual and a joy to read!
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HOT & URGENT!
Sizzling eroticism dear
Very captivating and enticing
rhyme and "flow" is grrr8 [pun intended]
Whilst you are wet, I need a cold
and 
Write On!..whewww
...wish you the best...David 
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Loved the lines"my tits are still in your face
nice and full and round"
Under pressure baby but still a fantasic erotic poem.
Good luck in your contest.
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hmmmmm...tempting oh so tempting,
my friend you have done it again, it is good to see you pen still crafting such sensual work, keep it flowing
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Ummmmm wow!!! if this is under pressure just very tasty. This got a nice rise out of me. Thank you so very much for entering this had me ready to I will stop there lol Good luck SH
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