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Cocaingel

I walked white lines
I saw Snow White
Cocaingels sang to me
that dark, lost night

I dreamed in snow
Of angel dust
Where her body swayed
In mysterious ways

I walked white paths
Lines I crossed, eyes closed
Enlightened was I
By white line lies
Cocaingel of Deaths kiss

She used me, seduced me
But I was a willing pawn
A sweet caress, promises on whispered breath
She is mine, Cocaingel

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 20, 2009

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    you know this kind of image would just make a great painting or something from what i see in my mind from what you have said, keep it flowing


    • Dmonik
      November 24, 2009
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      I'll write the words, you do the painting, lol
      I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, and thank you for your kind comments

      'D' (Scott)